The first person I critiqued today was Mira. Her design showed the idea of "flow", both in the skin of the building (which was a sort of membrane like structure of different thickness/transparency that allowed light to filter into the building.) The weave itself was very intricate and added a very interesting effect to the design of the 5 story building. Her matrix was also very detailed and well done and showed the relationship between all the floors "flowing" from one to the other as well as the weave around and on top of the building.
I really loved the weave design, it was a "wow" moment seeing how well put together and detailed it really was. I also liked the fact that the floors were linked with a sort of pole on which you could travel around the building in a sort of fun way. If anything could be improved it would perhaps be showing more detail on who the clients were, and how their needs were expressed within the building. However, overall, the design was very well made and effective.
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